Brown Eyed Girl

To love you is a challenge, To know you is a gift. To dislike you is impossible, But I'm hoping our hearts may drift. To love you is an art ...

I love the contrast in the poem between the cold and warm. Very nicely done. Also I think the start of the poem and the end of the poem can ...

Make me out of plastine, So you can mould me how you like. Make me out of something real, Like a flame or just some sunlight. Make me out of ...

I agree, this poem is stunning. really very well thought out. Me being slightly greedy would have love to read a bit more, but thats just me! My favourite bit ...

If she died tonight, What would you still see? The image of an effortless beauty? Would you remember the magic in those finger tips? Or the mystery in her eyes ...

Hey! I gotta admit, this poem kinda blew me away. It leaps off the page, its real, raw emotions that are brutal but hard to take your eyes away. I ...

Well this poem there isn't really a pattern, its just things people have said to me or ive said or wanted to say to people. For example ' Sorry I'm ...

Hey... I really liked this poem, its simple and gives great contrast to the too raw emotions and how they can both be present at the same time. I think ...

This poem is apoligises that either I've made or heard in my life and perhaps realising you don't need to apoligise after all. Hope you like it :D Sorry out ...

I can't believe only two people have commmented on your poem, I think it's beautiful. It can relate to people's lives and experience. Their failures which in fact does make ...

Nice idea. Well written but proof reading (something I deeply struggle with as well). I think both boys and girls can empathise with feeling like this so that's why it's ...

Preface I had never really thought about love before, it was just one of those things that had always been just a word. An abstract feeling that never flowed through ...

i totally agree, haven't been on for a while but this was great. Better than some books I've read. I love the imagery you use. April kinda reminds me of ...

Hey, I think u kidnapped my brain! Good job and I agree defo a situation a lot of people would find themselves in. But i do disagree. I feel the ...

Hey, nicely done! I totally love this poem. It's great idea. Reminds me. Your dying to write and you want it to be amazing. Easy to empathise with. I would ...